The enchanted garden of reality
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The enchanted garden of reality
par blackleg Mar 18 Aoû - 17:55
you see the beautiful forest
downing north and west ?!
that's my little garden of secrets
opened to devil's ears
those watching every single sound
that no one hears
those stealing the purest
moments of peace
but in my silent hill
among all the good trees
and their nice smell
there are big holes of sadness
as if coming from hell
so big and so deep
that no roots could stand
no seeds rising from land
those black holes
have such a devastating power
that mutes every bubble of happyness
every lightening particle
of my perishing soul...
downing north and west ?!
that's my little garden of secrets
opened to devil's ears
those watching every single sound
that no one hears
those stealing the purest
moments of peace
but in my silent hill
among all the good trees
and their nice smell
there are big holes of sadness
as if coming from hell
so big and so deep
that no roots could stand
no seeds rising from land
those black holes
have such a devastating power
that mutes every bubble of happyness
every lightening particle
of my perishing soul...
Dernière édition par blackleg le Ven 28 Aoû - 16:01, édité 1 fois
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Re: The enchanted garden of reality
par lolae Mer 19 Aoû - 19:51
blackleg a écrit:
but in my silent hill
among all the good trees
and their nice smell
there are big holes of sadness
as if coming from hell
so big and so deep
that no roots could stand
no seeds rising from land
le passage qui m'a fait vibrer
chapeau blacki
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Re: The enchanted garden of reality
par MeTaLLisTiC Mer 19 Aoû - 21:57
when i read it for the first time i was a little bit moved... the second time i was 
u touched me black.. ( in a textuall way !! bech mat5admouch m5a5kom
)
u touched me black.. ( in a textuall way !! bech mat5admouch m5a5kom
)
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Re: The enchanted garden of reality
par blackleg Jeu 20 Aoû - 2:29
thanks buddies 
beautiful or sad, it doesn't matter, I just liked the fact of speaking about something true, even with a far vocabulary ...
I think it's the first time that I've been writing to complete sense and not to complete riming sentences..I really didn't care about rimes, they came by the way...
lot of thanks for my source of inspiration
beautiful or sad, it doesn't matter, I just liked the fact of speaking about something true, even with a far vocabulary ...
I think it's the first time that I've been writing to complete sense and not to complete riming sentences..I really didn't care about rimes, they came by the way...
lot of thanks for my source of inspiration
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Re: The enchanted garden of reality
par Jihen Mer 26 Aoû - 20:25
Fantastic !!
Who really lived this power words must say you're an artist ! I greatly appreciate the wealth that is in your creative mind…
You have a great inspiration !!!
That's the truth
Who really lived this power words must say you're an artist ! I greatly appreciate the wealth that is in your creative mind…
You have a great inspiration !!!
That's the truth
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Re: The enchanted garden of reality
par MeTaLLisTiC Jeu 27 Aoû - 2:41
blackleg a écrit:
lot of thanks for my source of inspiration
Not 3ala toul Blaka
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Re: The enchanted garden of reality
par blackleg Ven 28 Aoû - 15:37
Jihen a écrit:Fantastic !!
Who really lived this power words must say you're an artist ! I greatly appreciate the wealth that is in your creative mind…
You have a great inspiration !!!
That's the truth
Thank you !!
that's too much for me...
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Re: The enchanted garden of reality
par blackleg Lun 7 Sep - 2:52
souma a écrit:very deep and professionnel black
thanks
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Re: The enchanted garden of reality
par Jihen Jeu 10 Sep - 1:47
Looking forward to see your new creativity
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